I need help with one of my English essays, I need to be reviewed and help with the feedback so I can jump my grade. I will attach the essay with the feedback from my professor.
i need help with my project Project 1 targets improving lifeguard training in NYC public pools, specifically in the NYC Parks and Recreation Department.
i need help with my project Project 1 targets improving lifeguard training in NYC public pools, specifically in the NYC Parks and Recreation Department. The goal is to streamline lifeguard readiness and response more effectively through modern training methods. I am suggesting the implementation of VR simulations, surprise emergency drills,