I need to write a statement for my university before applying. The words should not be less than 250 and more than 400. For more information check the attachment.
ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax,
ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions: -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%. This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40.